This Census Taker

Setting and structure

The story is told primarily from the point of view of a young boy, whose recollections are unreliable and disjointed chronologically, with occasional segments that are written at an undefined point in the future and are recounted by an older version of the narrator. The boy (unnamed in the novella) lives a remote house on a hill with his father and mother. They are on the outskirts of a community that is formed of a town built around (and on) a bridge that joins the hill with another. Much of the town is dilapidated, with ruined machinery and buildings left to rust and ruin. It is not explained what events led to this decline.

Plot summary

The father makes keys for the townspeople who come to visit him, which have magical properties attributed to them. The relationship between the parents is tense, and the boy occasionally witnesses the father killing animals and throwing the corpses into a crevasse in a nearby cave. The boy suspects that his father has also killed people in the same way. His mother grows crops and takes them to the town to trade, and to scavenge in the deserted areas of the settlement. In conversations with the boy, she says that his father came from a city, wanting to escape from it.

The boy witnesses a violent confrontation in his house. He flees to the town and initially reports that his mother has killed his father, before amending his story and stating that his father killed his mother. Two volunteer law officials go up the hill to investigate, leaving the boy in the care of street urchins with whom he is friends. The volunteers return, and after saying that they could find no evidence of violence, and after finding a letter purportedly from the mother saying that she was leaving, return the boy to his father's care. The boy fears his father, still believing that he has killed his mother that he has hidden the body in the hole within the cave.

The boy attempts to run away, crossing the bridge to the other half of the town with the street children. They are followed and after being beaten by an official is collected by the father. One day, when his father is away, a man with a gun identifying as a census-taker appears. He claims to be from the father's city and is responsible for locating and accounting for its inhabitants. He descends into the hole after hearing of the boy's belief as to his mothers fate, although what he finds is not revealed. He tells the boy to hide himself while he awaits his fathers return. After some time, the census-taker reappears and out of sight of the boy, drops something else into the hole. He then asks if the boy wishes to leave with him and become his associate. The boy agrees.

The sections set in the future imply that the boy has been imprisoned and is recording the information that he has collected in three books. He had a predecessor who also worked with the census-taker, whose fate is unclear and may have been present in the town during the events of the past. A coded message within the book he is writing states that the census-taker was rogue.